The Treaty of Waitangi video

I have been learning how to use Explain Everything to share my ideas 

about the Treaty of Waitangi

Recount Writing-My draft copy.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount writing
This is the draft copy of my writing

Recount Writing-The basketball court.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language
for recount writing.
This is the published copy of my writing

On the weekend I went with my dad to the
park to play basketball.  I felt happy.  

First I was shooting the ball in the hoop. 
I got lots of goals. I felt happy.  

Next we went to get lunch.  It was good.  

After that, we went back to the basketball court.  

Finally,  we went to the park to play
on the swing and then I went to have dinner. 
It was fun. We had a little walk.

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