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On Sunday On Sunday I drove somewhere to go hunting with my cousins and my dad. When we got there, I was excited and I was running around the place. My dad said, “Shshsh!” because I was too loud We looked around the place until my dad found a pig. He ran to it and caught it. Then my Dad killed it with knife. That was bloody. My dad picked up the pig and put it on his back. Next we walked up the hill until my dad found another pig. All of us came to see my dad kill the pig. I was scared that the pig would jump on me. Then we went to the place where our car was. When we got there we got the 2 pigs and we put them on the trailer. Then I was sitting in the car and then my cousin came to sit by me. I asked my cousin if he wanted a drink and then I asked if we could go home. When we got home I had a shower. I had a great day.
