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Thursday, 25 June 2020

Recount

WALT use the correct structure and language for my writing.
Going for a walk up a hill.
On Saturday I went for a walk up a hill with my dad and my sister. it was a hot day.  The hill was slippery. 
It was fun going up but it was hard coming down.
I was tired. Me and my sister were way behind
my dad.
We had a break. It was a long break. I felt better 
We kept on walking. It was a long walk.
We found a rock to sit on. It was an amazing.
We went to the top of the hill and then we went down the hill. My sister fell over in the mud. She got back up. We went to the car. That was a great day.

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