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Recount Writing The big flood

Walt: To make our writing more interesting for our readers

 The Big Flood

On Friday morning I was in bed asleep. Then I heard a sound. It was a great big sound. I jumped up with a fright. I got out of my bed and I went to the window.  I saw the heaviest rain I have ever seen in my life. It was so loud. It woke me up. I went outside to check the flood. 

It was all over the place. I felt scared. My hands were shaking and my legs were like jelly.  

Next I had a shower.  It was nice and warm.  After that we watched tv all day. Finally we had to go to bed.  It was

still raining but not as hard as in the morning.  I hoped we were going to be safe, sleeping in our house.